Monday, September 6, 2010

Tomorrow is the First Day

The yellow monsters roam the streets, stalking, pausing, taking people to where they do not want to go.
And tomorrow they will come for me.
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2 comments:

  1. EmmaSeptember 9, 2010 at 2:00 PM

    Abby, I really really like this. One suggestion, if I may? Maybe use a stronger word than "taking."
    That's all. :)

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  2. Abigail GaySeptember 9, 2010 at 7:54 PM

    Shirley?

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